The following passage contains some incredibly boring words.  Could you please improve it by replacing the underlined words with something more exciting.  You can  rewrite the passage in your neatest St. Stephen's handwriting and then type a few of your improved sentences in the comment box so that I can see.

 

 

One nice day last summer, Katy decided to walk to the park. She said to Jenny “ Would you like to come too?”

 

“Oh yes please,” said Jenny.

 

The two friends had a good chat on the way to the park about their summer.  They were both happy that the weather was so lovely. However, Katy was sad that her little sister had been taken to the farm as a special treat.  She had been naughty and Mum was cross with her.

 

“Don’t be upset and spoil today though,” said Jenny.

 

When they got to the park, the girls were happy to find that they had the playground to themselves. They walked to the swings and started to play.  After a while, Katy said that they should go and buy some lollies.  They were nice.  When they had finished, the girls walked home.

 

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